User talk:JosephineHriscu/Esther Brandeau

Hi Josephine - Great job on getting started on this and on figuring out how to manage Wikipedia. These sections are well written, though you'll want to make sure to proofread people's names, just to make sure French spellings and that citation details are correct. You have really solid sources, though a little dates, and the tone of the background material is well-handled. I think the section on New France needs a few more dates and specific events so readers can figure out what that era held for people like Esther. The legacy section will always be a work in progress as other Wikipedia folks add to it. Linking to some other Wikipedia articles will help there too. That is really the next step - making sure the two sections that you and Ayala wrote blend and that you have links to other Wikipedia articles. I didn't check the links, but that is another piece.

Great work and you should be happy with how this is progressing!

Anne HydeAfh1858 (talk) 12:07, 7 April 2021 (UTC)