User talk:JosephineHriscu/Esther Brandeau/SJFlood29 Peer Review

Josephine, This article is off to a great start. Your style of writing is concise and to the point. My advice for you moving forward is to add more information to each section, check some of your sources, and add those images to finish up your article.SJFlood29 (talk) 02:55, 10 April 2021 (UTC)