User talk:Joseromani09/sandbox

The biggest grammatical error I could fine was the sentence that states "this would lead to resolutions to known issues and research proposals in the engineering field.". The beginning of the sentence needs a space as it is connected to the previous sentence, it also needs to be capitalized and restructured a bit, if you read it out loud it sounds a bit weird. Other than that the only other things you should change is that you should include your sources specifically at the end of the sentence that they correlate with. Good work.

-Oscar Orozco