User talk:Josh Havlik/sandbox

Stephchen (talk) 01:09, 23 March 2012 (UTC) Just to establish who is doing what: Stephanie C.: History of the Lake Stephane B.: Activities of the Lake Sarah: The Island near the Lake Keerthika: KLCOA Association Josh: Annual weather patterns, water quality, final edit, final wikipedia posting Make sure you get your part done and posted on the sandbox by Monday night Stephchen (talk) 14:31, 25 March 2012 (UTC) so i was reading about the history of the lake and i wasn't sure how extensive my writing should be. a lot of it talks about economy, immigration, and other things and i'm not sure if i should include that in the history of the lake itself or not. what do you guys think? Sarah_Ariano (talk) 14:54, 25 March 2012 (UTC) sure, that sounds like a good idea, you can always do subsections by using subheadings. Stephchen (talk) 16:35, 25 March 2012 (UTC) well im just wondering how in depth i need to go with it because some of the article talks about getting profit from the trees on the land and other things like that. should i include that or do you think that stuff isn't necessary? Sarah_Ariano (talk) 16:55, 25 March 2012 (UTC) maybe not, its up to you for what you think is necessary. Keerthika.ravi (talk) 16:57, 25 March 2012 (UTC) i have a ques. it says the kloca conducts events like swimming, boating, hiking. who is this done for? for the people who stays in the cottage? or owners of the cottage? of just people living in that area? Stephchen (talk) 18:11, 25 March 2012 (UTC) Hey guys so i posted my part of the project but there are some facts that i can't seem to put in the right place and i'm not sure what to title the headings as. could you help me figure that out? Thanks Keerthika.ravi (talk) 18:29, 25 March 2012 (UTC) also does it matter how long it should be? Stephchen (talk) 19:42, 25 March 2012 (UTC) i don't think there's a specific length you have to have because there's only so much information on a particular topic. i don't think my part is terribly extensive but i would like to think it does the job. we can discuss it before or after tutorial on tuesday maybe to kinda see where we all are and what we need to work on Keerthika.ravi (talk) 20:11, 25 March 2012 (UTC) ok Good. cus i saw urs and i dont think i have alot of info as urs Sarah_Ariano (talk) 12:54, 26 March 2012 (UTC)The KLCOA consists of only paid members, you pay an annual fee to become a member of the organization. The event is called a regatta, and all of the members/ owners of the cottages are welcome to attend and participate. hope that helps! StephBlaquers (talk) 13:08, 26 March 2012 (UTC) wait should i mention that it's only paid members Sarah_Ariano (talk) 13:25, 26 March 2012 (UTC) no just say the members of the association Sarah_Ariano (talk) 14:44, 26 March 2012 (UTC) Hi Everyone,

Well the ice on Kennisis is pretty much all gone, a few patches in some back bays. But, its about 1 month ahead of schedule at any rate... Water Levels are 3 feet below the typical peak, with lots of time to go..

Looking at the weather and knowing whats best for planting, I have to move the pickup date forward 1 weekend.

"The pickup date will be the morning of Saturday April 28th"

To make pickup easier for everyone and to save congestion at our cottage, I have 4 time slots during the day...

If you have received this email your pickup time is anywhere in between, 12pm - 1pm !! ... coffee and baileys ..!?

Directions: 1044 Turret Lane, we are 4km west from Marina off Wilkinson Dr. (formerly South Kennisis Dr), Turret Lane is a spur road off Wilkinson, once on Turret Lane bare left and follow until you see the Beach's or Son of a Beach road signs... cottage # 754 3612

I know we all are not up every weekend and this weekend may not work for all, please do your best to pickup or make arrangements with me and we will figure something out... The trees will last if left cool and in a dark place until each are ready to plant...

Here is another email it might help with some other things StephBlaquers (talk) 17:08, 26 March 2012 (UTC) Hey Sarah, for the Regatta, who are the trophies named after Sarah_Ariano (talk) 19:57, 26 March 2012 (UTC) some are name after families who have donated money, and others are significant individuals who have put lots of effort into the KLCOA. One is called the Butt trophy, but i cant recall any more, hope that helps! Keerthika.ravi (talk) 03:38, 27 March 2012 (UTC) Hi! I posted my part about the KLCOA. Please feel free to correct any mistakes I made. If you look at the very last sentence, "If interested in becoming..." i was about to put the website link at the end but was not sure if that will be counted as copyrights issue. Thanks Stephchen (talk) 20:40, 27 March 2012 (UTC) Hey Sarah, just wanted you to know that I edited your part of the page.

Stephchen (talk) 22:39, 27 March 2012 (UTC) I'd also like to note that I edited the KCLOA section of the article just now. Keerthika.ravi(talk)19:25, 27 March 2012 (UTC) HI Stephanie B I put in the bullet points for your list for you. Also thank you Steph C for checking my section Stephchen (talk) 02:43, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Could you guys please look over my section to see where things should go? I could really use your help with editing! thanks Keerthika.ravi(talk)8:14, 28 March 2012 (UTC)Hi Steph C, I edited your work. So far its good. I made changes to the Interesting facts section.I put them in chronological order. Also 1 sentence I was not able to understand was "The First Nation in the Kennisis area gave up all rights to ands, along the..." What is the "to ands"  supposed to be related to? Thanks Keerthika.ravi(talk)8:41, 28 March 2012 (UTC)Hi everyone, I edited the reference list too and gave each link a title. Stephchen (talk) 14:18, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Hey Keerthika, I fixed the confusion with that sentence (there was just a letter missing which made it more confusing sorry). Although, I'm not sure if we should have an "interesting facts" section seeing that normally wikipedia articles don't seem to have that. if anything, they normally have a section called "trivia," which is similar to an interesting facts section, but that seems to only be for shows, movies, etc. Do you think we should keep the information there, delete it, or find a section where it may fit? Also, do we need both a references section AND an extended links section? shouldn't we just have one or the other?

Sarah_Ariano (talk) 17:43, 28 March 2012 (UTC)I think we should keep the Interesting Facts section and keep it at the end where Steph put it more recently.