User talk:Joshjensen308

Hey Josh, my name is Chris and I'm from your pop culture class! Just finished the assignments and got started on Wikipedia, and as instructed, I'm here to say hi and hope I'm the first one who comments on your talk page! Chriszhouzzl97 (talk) 19:01, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Joshjensen308, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hey Josh,

I just went through your sandbox and checked out your bibliography and draft. Your draft so far is looking very organized, well-thought, and informative. Furthermore, the sources that you are using for the citations are also credible, making the information you are putting down solid. I also looked through the page that you will be adding this into and I think it is great that you are adding Okinawans to the article. It definitely shows that you have been thinking about this topic for a while (considering the sources you wrote and the in-depth information you knew about the sources) so I'm sure it'll turn out great when you're ready to publish into the main space! The only thing that I would add to make your article even better would be to try to find more sources to add on to your already cited sentences, just so that the information is solidified by multiple sources rather than just one. Other than that, the progress of your article thus far is far beyond substantial.

Good luck! Sarahyonin (talk) 21:33, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

Hello Josh,

Your draft was very informative and pretty much every single sentence is backed up with a citation, providing the reader with confidence that the information is correct. I would reread your draft for capitalization and grammatical mistakes as certain words are randomly capitalized while some sentences are missing punctuation. If you have time, pictures are always nice to add to articles. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. Ellee2000 (talk) 16:57, 13 November 2019 (UTC)