User talk:Joshsminer/sandbox

I really like how you are creating a section of "Geographic Barriers" and then also following it up with "Solutions to Geographic Barriers." This makes the information much more holistic and fluid as opposed to open ended. I am just a bit confused as to whether or not you are keeping the section on "Epistemic Barriers." According to your key, it is all from the original Wiki Page and all underlined. Are you editing any of that section or just have it in your sandbox for cohesiveness?

I feel like you don't need the first sentence of the Geographic Barriers section and should just start off with the second sentence - it gets right to the issue, no fluff necessary especially when it comes to Wikipedia. I feel like there can be more added to geographic barriers, maybe give some more examples of geographic barriers - possibly an example of one where your PE is located..?

Solutions section is brief but to the point... this is good.

For the rural poverty section, just fix a bit of the wording and grammar. Some of the sentences are a bit repetitive and can be more succinct. Rural poverty is a very broad topic, I think it may be helpful to get a bit more specific in this section but overall you do a great job at summarizing the issue and examples of rural poverty within China.

Great work!

Hako97 (talk) 20:12, 8 November 2018 (UTC)Hannah