User talk:JouBurkeC/Magazine St.

Hello!! your article looks so good!1 i like how you were able to embed the pictures into the words that way you could learn a little more about the word highlighted and also receive a picture of it. that was a great touch. your information was also good as well the only thing I would tweak would be being more specific. for example tell us which restaurants are on that street or things to do. you told us there are things to do but you didnt tell us the names or what they are.

Hey, I completed your peer review. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MyersJam (talk • contribs) 16:29, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

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This is off to a really good start. You have some nice content in here that balances the history and the contemporary. You should consider adding to the "Lifestyle & Description" section (perhaps think about renaming, as well) to describe the stores and restaurants that give Magazine its unique character. This could be through a few thorough descriptions of just specific stores and restaurants or through some lists with brief details like we discussed in class last week.

Your sources and citations need some work. According to your current citations, the first half of the history paragraph comes from the PRC source and the second half comes from no source. I doubt either of those is accurate. Remember that every fact you include in your article must be cited, unless it is general knowledge.

Keep up the good work! jtodd1973 20:57, 7 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)