User talk:Jovanmrls120/sandbox

Peer Review
I feel like you did a decent job at getting an overall draft of your information onto the post. I do have a few main points to hit. My first is are you writing an overall page on Taoism? If that is the case, you have hit the main points and beliefs. In your initial paragraph, you uh do have a sentence that says"I feel", which implies a very subjective view on the topic. You need to remember to keep an objective view point, and It would be best to speak in that point of view. Overall, I feel you got a decent amount of information with corroborating sources to back it. Charter83 (talk) 00:46, 28 October 2019 (UTC)