User talk:Joy-t-g/sandbox

peer review
- I like the idea of adding the alloparental care section to the article, i say that it best fits in the Parental Care section and putting in a sub header as you said. - I like the idea of rewording paragraph so it is not misleading maybe instead of using "misleading' use "expanding" as you said already - I was a little confused as to where in the wikipedia article you were going to edit/add the "grandmother hypothesis" that you wrote in your draft. Are you adding that part in along with the alloparental care section? If so I think that's a great idea!