User talk:Joyb3/Experimental psychology/BrookeCarr01 Peer Review

Hi Bekah!

You have a great start to editing this article! I like where you have added links to existing Wiki articles for some of the people and experiments you have mentioned. I don't have too many suggestions right off the bat. There is a missing comma in the sentence just after introducing Stanley Milgram between "In both experiments" and "ordinary individuals." I also suggest being careful with wordiness like "very strongly." Your citations are pretty dated, so I would suggest adding in a reference within the past five years if possible.