User talk:Joycelivmarshall/Humanitarian crisis/Elizabethmattioli Peer Review

I suggest that you add in at the end of your introduction what a humanitarian crisis is for example. I like how you explained what it was in the beginning so the readers had an idea of what you were talking about but I think it would be helpful to add in an example of what your talking about. Also another thing I suggest doing is adding in at least one more picture to make your article more interesting. 23:33, 1 December 2021 (UTC)~