User talk:Joykim328

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This is Jess from UGBA39E's peer review of your article edits on e-voting.
Firstly -- I'd like to mention vaguely just for the sake of fulfilling the requirements of the seminar: I was unable to find the remaining of your 3-5 articles on the WikiEd homepage. Please correct me if I'm wrong or merely really bad at searching for your username.

Secondly - I reviewed your edits and comments on Electronic Voting's talk page. It seems you did a really good, thorough analysis of the sources and checked whether or not sources were credible based on their origin (primary, secondary, medium of source, etc.). However, I wasn't able to find the 15-30 sources you added -- please let me know if they're there and I should be searching harder for them.

General suggestions: It seems you chose a really well-read and frequently edited article with lots of insight from multiple Wiki users (not sure how credible they all are, but from the discourse on the talk page, seemed all like thoughtful and intelligible people). I can't think of many improvements to this article without making it excessive - there has already been lots of work done on it, it appears. Perhaps just triple checking to make sure all citations exist where it sensibly makes sense for them to do so, and that the citations are relevant, accurate, and consistent.

Good job!

Jxyao (talk) 06:41, 30 November 2016 (UTC)