User talk:Jpagu/Frank Buffalo Hyde

I really like how you formnated your Sandbox.

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Overall, I really like your artist because the artist has a goal with how people vizualize art. You mention about the way he was born and was still able to make his art known. You showed small details about your artist but did not bnack up any information. Focus on creadible sourcers like journals or about his book. These are creadible sources that you can use to backup your information you stated. One tip I can get from you is to put on my publication section on my artist. Add more detail on important sections like about his life and his art symbolizing.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) - I really like how you formnated your Sandbox.  Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 2) - I also like how you start off with the topic sentence for each section.  Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 3) - I like how you stated how the goal of your artist was and the struggles he faced. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 4) - I would change the last sentence of the Artwoork section. It goes off with the section or can you add more detail about this. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 5) - I would add more detail on this section because is an interesting section that can have more detail about it.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 6) - You made great points on your whole entire Sanbox but you should back it up with evidence. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 7) - I feel like you should add more resources to your artist because it looks like your artist went through alot and you should be able to post it.
 * 8) - I would also put the exibitions, collection, and publications links.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 9) - I would also add a section about his early life or how become an artist. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 10) - Also look more about his personal life. What he does besides art? Is he marry? Does he have any siblings? Does he has any kids? < look for information like this because I can tell he went through a lot in his life.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 11) - You mention about his goal as being an artist, you should expand more on that with credible sources.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 12) - you can add links to the exibitions from your information so that people can see how his work is done.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 13) - Defiently look into gettiong more information resource.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 14) - I would suggest to look at his jounrels if he have any so that way you have a sources to backup about his life.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 15) - A tip I would suggest is to overall summerize each section for like exibitions, collections, and publications. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) - I would also add a section about his early life or how become an artist. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 2) - Also look more about his personal life. What he does besides art? Is he marry? Does he have any siblings? Does he has any kids? < look for information like this because I can tell he went through a lot in his life.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 3) - You mention about his goal as being an artist, you should expand more on that with credible sources.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 4) - you can add links to the exibitions from your information so that people can see how his work is done.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 5) - Defiently look into gettiong more information resource.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 6) - I would suggest to look at his jounrels if he have any so that way you have a sources to backup about his life.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 7) - A tip I would suggest is to overall summerize each section for like exibitions, collections, and publications. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) - you can add links to the exibitions from your information so that people can see how his work is done.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 2) - Defiently look into gettiong more information resource.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 3) - I would suggest to look at his jounrels if he have any so that way you have a sources to backup about his life.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 4) - A tip I would suggest is to overall summerize each section for like exibitions, collections, and publications. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) - I would suggest to look at his jounrels if he have any so that way you have a sources to backup about his life.Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 2) - A tip I would suggest is to overall summerize each section for like exibitions, collections, and publications. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) - A tip I would suggest is to overall summerize each section for like exibitions, collections, and publications. Angel Miranda 24 (talk) 07:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)