User talk:Jpagu/Frank Buffalo Hyde/Fountainbook Peer Review

This article is brief but informational. Please add sub header-type style to art piece titles, for readability. This article remains neutral, but does not have any visible references or sources, which poses a problem if this article was to go live. This makes the reader question where the information came from and if was copied or paraphrased. Sentences phrased like the artist said them must be sourced or they could be taken as observer's interpretation of the pieces, which makes the article no longer neutral. There is an early life section, but there is no rest of the life noted. If no other part of life will be noted in the future, it might be in the best interest to just put "bibliography" overall. There is no education section- reader is left wondering if the artist is completely uneducated, despite being born somewhat recently and still alive.