User talk:Jpanserm/sandbox

Hello,

To look a bit more like a biographical article on Wikipedia, this draft would need:


 * Third party sources, ie sources not owned by any of her employer and no text written by the researcher herself
 * An introductory paragraph (I added the first three words for it)
 * Internal links to anything that someone such as a high school teacher in Hong Kong would not know about or might want to read more in depth about (ie URSI, EPFL, microwaves, antenna, electromagnetism, ...)
 * No picture not directly related to the researcher (ie a picture of her) or her research (ie a picture or diagram of one of her experiments)
 * A description of the research that led her to receive a prize
 * A more neutral tone, which could be achieved by :
 * Removing the "Reseach vision" title header and including the text within a section concerning her research
 * Avoiding the reuse the vision of the researcher as is, by avoiding phrases turns such as "this calls for" without further explanation

Thanks for this start, and I wish you a good time completing it!--Flor WMCH (talk) 10:39, 16 February 2021 (UTC)