User talk:Jparada210/Positive behavior interventions and supports

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There isn't much activity in your sandbox so you'll need to start stepping this up a bit. Your edits are strong, but some of the material from other authors needs to be revised.

This statement is not correct and should be changed to reflect that PBIS schools may use PBIS to reduced exclusionary discipline, but most PBIS schools still employ exclusionary methods: “In contrast to PBIS, many schools used exclusionary discipline practices including detentions, suspensions, or expulsions to separate students from the classroom and from peers.

This statement is also not true and should be revised to reflect what PBIS is. [RTI does not develop personalized learning plans for all students. PBIS is not always team-based]: “PBIS is a team-based framework for schools that borrows elements from response to intervention, an intervention that uses diagnostic data to develop personalized learning plans for all students.” Lndmayg (talk) 15:06, 6 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello Dr. Mayger,
 * Thank you so much for the feedback. I will continue to make edits and move portions of the article into my sandbox. I'm sorry for any misunderstandings, this is my first time ever working with wikipedia from an editor perspective. I will fix the two incorrect statements you pointed out as well. Thank you for your continued support and dedication to my education.
 * Kind regards,
 * Julia Parada Jparada210 (talk) 21:06, 10 April 2024 (UTC)