User talk:Jpasa002/sandbox

Taylor's Peer Review
Currently the article you are working on is very sparse. Additional information about the topic would benefit it greatly. Also, I am not sure of why some of the references that are currently in the reference section are there. A few of them do not seem to be related to the current information in the article at all. Adding addition, relevant references would increase the credibility of the article. Tml2013 (talk) 20:30, 16 November 2017 (UTC)