User talk:Jpate2/sandbox

Hey this is Maria Harris your peer review partner. You have a lot of great points here, I'm very interested in the person you decided to choose, and it was very cool to learn information about her.My only suggestion is to add one more point because you only have four right now, other than that everything is great!!!!

Hi Justin. Tis is Kaitlyn Pittman. I think you have done a great job on uncovering unknown information about Ruth First. She seems to be very interesting. You're doing great so far, but I do have a few suggestions: 1. In your third point, under the family and education section I would change "in the 1950s protest era where the government...." to "in the 1950s protest era in which the government..."

2. Also, in that same sentence did you means to say "the government outlawed any movements in opposition to their policies or outlawed any movements that opposed their policies?

3. Also, I would another point because you only have four so far.

Otherwise, everything else looks good! Kmpittman (talk) 21:25, 25 April 2020 (UTC)Kmpittman