User talk:Jpatrickc/sandbox

Sophia Monsibais peer review
Looking good so far! Perhaps consider the wording implying that Manuela Saenz was important because she was Bolivar's lover. She seems to have done many things on her own to make her important without that!

Thanks so much! Regarding my page, specifically Manuela Saenz is directly related to Bolivar as his lover. Jpatrickc (talk) 16:36, 26 November 2018 (UTC)Patrick Coffee

Thank you for the reply! Manuela Saenz was important for many reasons, however, specially relating to Simon Bolivar she was important because she acted as a confidant to Bolivar. Golf316 (talk) 17:17, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Grayson Kapiloff