User talk:Jpb782

Hank Grier Peer Review
Hello,

The immunosurgery article you have submitted looks great as it is currently. I feel that the concepts are potentially out of reach of non-scientist wiki readers, but with the links provided it isn't too difficult to acquire further background knowledge in order to clarify parts of the article. As a suggestion, I might suggest adding a further description of the paper linked at the bottom of the article. It mentions that this was the first recorded use of this procedure, so a bit more background might be interesting from a historical or methodological perspective. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hgrier (talk • contribs) 21:35, 5 May 2017 (UTC)

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