User talk:Jpk25

August 2018
Thank you for contributing to Wikipida. I have undone your edits at Whalehead Club, however. In the first place, you need to provide citations to reliable, published, secondary sources. In the second place, Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a travel guide; phrases like "Well-buffed cork tile floors provided a practical, as well as comfortable finish" sound like a brochure, and don't fit the formal tone that we use. In the third place, it reads like an attempt to praise the place, and not a neutral description of the place.

I don't want to discourage you. Please feel free to re-add any data for which you can find sources--meaning secondary sources: things that people have written about the Whalehead Club, not what the Whalehead Club has written about itself. You may find Referencing for Beginners and the Teahouse helpful. NewEnglandYankee (talk) 00:16, 8 August 2018 (UTC)


 * I see that you are adding a list of references, which shows the right spirit. If you follow Wikipedia's practices, the reference list will be generated automatically from citations given in the text. NewEnglandYankee (talk) 00:18, 8 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Please (at minimum) put your references into proper Wikipedia format; see WP:REFB and WP:CITE. Also, please look at other, similar Wikipedia articles to get an idea of what it should look like. As it stands, someone is very likely to undo your changes or even delete the whole article. NewEnglandYankee (talk) 14:56, 8 August 2018 (UTC)