User talk:Jrbogen/sandbox

Peer Review

So I only found one spelling error (irridation), but otherwise no other grammatical or spelling errors. However, your draft is not organized like it would be in the article page, I feel like you could use some reformatting to make all your information flow with each other rather than just choppy one or two sentence chunks. I can understand using that as a way to get all your information together when doing research, but reformatting will be important when you get to the actual article! Also, I didn't see in text citations for your sources. It is going to be very important that you provide citations for information that you have gathered from the sources you've researched. Overall though, I feel like you've got a good start, and this is only a draft, so you have plenty of time to fix things! Good Luck!