User talk:Jropeach/Alice Wu/TruffautStalker Peer Review

The article in its entirety is really well thought through. The best part about it all is your addition of numerous references placed evenly throughout your text, making it an extremely reliable piece of writing. The focus on her films and the atmosphere surrounding them highlights her dedication to creating films that represent her community in a realistic way, which I think is a great thing to focus on and is something I would love to add to my article as it not only highlights the need for more diversity but also the importance of Wu's work within the film industry. The set up of your page flows really well, progressing in a timeline that makes sense to Wu's life which makes it that much easy to follow.

If I were to suggest anything to make this a stronger article, I would recommend adding to the leading paragraph. It seems, upon first look, that this leading paragraph existed before you added in your work so this isn't really a critique of your work, however if you were to add to it and make it 3 - 4 sentences long the page would be almost perfect. And if I were to suggest another minor change I would say that maybe adding in another reference to the Half of It paragraph just so you've got a reference for each sentence, as this would just make it that much stronger. And I would also recommend adding references to the Personal life section, although I also think that that may have been added by another editor. Apart from that I can't see anything else in there that I would personally edit. Your spelling and sentence structure are great and I think only tiny minor changes can be made but I would personally only do that if you see fit.

I really enjoyed reading your article and I think you've done a great job! TruffautStalker (talk) 21:05, 4 November 2019 (UTC)