User talk:Js134/Earworm

- The Hook could be worked down a little bit to make it more coherent, too many similes. - The bit about musical hallucinations and the INMI term in general could be saved for later in the article, clunky in introduction. - The first paragraph should probably be used for very basic information about earworms, but the one you have seems very jumbled and all over the place with a focus on similes of the word - The second paragraph is better, but more information is definitely needed to make a coherent article. - Your sources were used too much on similes and words that mean the same thing as earworms, more work needs to be put into finding information about earworms - For example: What neural mechanisms create earworms? History about earworms? How do they work? Is there any correlation between a specific type of music and getting earworms?

Essentially, you just need more information. A good place to start would be the original article.