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 * The man does successfully build a fire prior to the failed last attempt. This sentence makes it seem like the man never was successful throughout his entire endeavor.JsansoUNH (talk) 17:22, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * There is no mention of the dog's breed being a "Husky", it is refereed to as a "wolf-dog".JsansoUNH (talk) 17:22, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * The dog mentioned is not the mans dog, it is described as a native dog inside the story (p. 66)JsansoUNH (talk) 17:22, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * The man doesn't "repeatedly abandon his fire", he was only successful in making a fire one time, the next attempt is foiled by the tree branches giving way to the shaking and dousing the fire with now.JsansoUNH (talk) 17:22, 9 April 2019 (UTC)