User talk:Jscaglio/sandbox

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Update Information in Right Box 

On the right side box under "legislative history", there could be an added point where it says that the Bill was passed on July 18, 2013 with the Unanimous vote count. Updating this information may help reduce time to see that the bill was actually enacted.

List of Supporters

It may be beneficial to have a list of sponsors, both government and non-governmental so that people can see what kinds of aviation groups were in favor and helped get the bill pass. Adding this information would help people understand the importance of passing such legislation.

New Information

Since this act is almost six years old, I think that it would be beneficial to find updated information on the impact of the legislation. There may have been modifications to the Bill or updated amendments to the bill and other provisions. Further Citation #2,3,8,9,10, and 11 does not work anymore. Either removing the information or citing that link no longer applies will help with information. Some of the information referenced does not seem to come from primary or reliable sources. Many being outdated websites.

Jscaglio (talk) 04:06, 7 February 2019 (UTC)