User talk:Jshapely

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Then have a look at our tutorial.

Lectonar (talk) 08:28, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

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Because you joined so early, you cannot make an article yet. Ignore that. Anyway, your article is awaiting review at the AfC at the moment, be patient and return to your AfC page accordingly.

Abigail was here :D  Talk to Me.   Email Me.  19:23, 23 March 2012 (UTC)

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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ALESSANDRO LIBERATI
Jshapely,

I have spent several hours on your article, and I can understand the problem of not having it sound like a tribute. However, there was and maybe still is a lot of promotional wording. I have tried to tone down your article without ruining your work, because I am not an expert in this field. I do not feel comfortable in approving it, since I somewhat now have a WP:COI. I am putting it back in the queue for review. You can still work on your article while waiting for another reviewer to look at it. It is very well referenced, so I do not think that will be a problem. It is only the seeming WP:NPOV that is a problem. Good Luck!  :- ) DCS 17:11, 9 April 2012 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation
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Approval of article
Find some controversy, find a quote from someone who did not like him. Nobody is perfect. Nobody. If you can find something, put it in the article, I can then approve it and deal with AfD later.  :- ) Don 19:14, 1 May 2012 (UTC)

Hello -- I've moved the article in question, Alessandro Liberati, to the encyclopedia. I may make a few clean-up edits, but the article seems to meet all the criteria. I looked at many Articles for Creation, and yours was the strongest one I saw! Riggr Mortis (talk) 04:10, 3 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Jshapely, would you do me a favor and look at the "citation needed" tags I placed in the article. From my review of your sources, the citations do exist, so it's simply a matter of moving or adding those citations to where they directly support the claims. Riggr Mortis (talk) 04:27, 3 May 2012 (UTC)