User talk:Jshusain

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The first line of the article should be removed as it is loaded with bias. The article is well organized and your contributions to the problems and pressures of resource exploitation no doubt strengthen the article. Your addition of 'developing countries' is important, but perhaps use a different term. The global north and global south are terms that are much more politically correct. Also, it would have strengthened the article if you were to add a section on the global north because realistically we are the benefactors of the global south's exploited resources. It would have been a worthwhile addition if you were to include societies that have met their end because of resource exploitation. The Mayans and Easter Island inhabitants are quintessential examples. Going hand and hand with this is the use of modern day technology to exploit resources on previously inconceivable scales. Technology is an important part of resource exploitation and the addition of the heading would have improved the article greatly. Overall though you improved this article significantly. Mta.crk (talk) 19:28, 30 March 2012 (UTC)