User talk:Jstil0006/Gladys Lounsbury Hobby

Hello. This information was in the article, so I assume that you have already published it. Question? The sources that you referenced, are they new content added to the article or existing that you found new information from? Your tone in your sandbox is great. You are presenting the information neutrally and concisely. Perhaps you could have added another section with the heading research or contributions with her publication info or if there is any published work available from her work on penicillin. Rebekah.a.epps (talk) 01:10, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Hi, I just got finished reviewing your article and I found it was really good. I enjoyed the sources used and also the content and information added, I think it really helps bolster the strength of the original article. I had a few suggestions. The first was to try and find more information on the early or late life of Gladys Lounsbury Hobby, and then add sections corresponding with "early" or "late" life. I also think if you can find an imagine that helps improve the article, you should definitely try and do that!Cameronobr1 (talk) 02:17, 15 March 2021 (UTC)