User talk:Jsykes521/sandbox

The thinks you are discussing are valid points on cuteness. The only thing I would say is make sure you can view your sources because I tried to press the citations to see them and it basically said they were not available. Another thing you should do is explain the studies you found not just give a fact and cite it. While that is good and simple, a description on where your facts are coming from will bulk up the paragraphs you are explaining and allow those who can't access the articles and studies, like students, will be able to understand where you drew those conclusions. Good so far!! And remember connecting to other pages on wiki is your friend lol.

-Alex

Nice topic and article thus far. I would definitely add some more sources and work on connecting with other pages or cites. I would most definitely put an entire section in the article and talk about why this topic is important, how it relates to psychology, and more examples or situations with everyday life. I added a reference section to your sandbox so you may want to check if those sources are showing up under that heading now. As for grammar, it is excellent and sound great. However there were a couple of sentences that I did not understand, perhaps because I needed to understand the topic a little more in detail to get what you were trying to say. Maybe you can add some studies in your article as well! Good luck and great job!

-Victoria Parker — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vdpa222 (talk • contribs) 13:58, 20 April 2012 (UTC)