User talk:Jtc79

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Hello, Jtc79, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hey, good job on the first section. Overall, I definitely found it to contain some good facts. However, remember this should be purely factual. Do not worry about making the article sound pretty. Your opening sentence does contain a little bias, saying that it is becoming increasingly more controversial. Just stick to the facts you researched. Also, in the specific case section, definitely try to stick more to the facts. Does tend to put words into the mouth of some of the people quoted. Just be more straightforward.

Amb401 (talk) 15:43, 28 November 2016 (UTC)amb401Amb401 (talk) 15:43, 28 November 2016 (UTC)