User talk:Jtc79/sandbox

This article is lacking information on the many bans and instances of censorship that have plagued this novel. In the coming weeks, I plan to create a section solely dedicated to the controversies and add information on specific cases. In addition to these improvements, I will add information from more scholarly sources on the reception of the novel by young adults I noticed a few citations from unreliable sources. Even though the information they claim may be accurate it is still better to back up this information with more reputable citations.

Jtc79 (talk) 04:03, 14 November 2016 (UTC)Joe CarneyJtc79 (talk) 04:03, 14 November 2016 (UTC)

Overall, I thought your drafts were very good. At times there are instances of vague language, and sometimes your writing strays a little bit from neutrality, but these things didn't happen too often. We both have a lot of info about the Wallingford case, so it might be a good idea to maybe merge our sections on that that together next week when we start going live with our edits. See my email for specifics on the drafts.Ruesch97 (talk) 15:43, 21 November 2016 (UTC)