User talk:Jtn999

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bobby Keyes (June 4)
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Zach Vega ( talk to me ) 01:17, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
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Hi Zach, Thank you for your incredibly fast and thorough response. I have changed the article by sourcing the bio information regarding Keyes's hometown from The Noise to The Boston Globe. I have eliminated the quote from The Noise article calling Keyes a "master" guitar player. I am hoping the more objective information about the equipment Keyes uses can remain sourced to the Noise. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Bobby_Keyes Thank you! Jeff P.S. Please forgive that I messed up on the talkback by leaving reply on your page before putting it on mine.

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Hi ShallowHarold, I appreciate that you pointed out that I was overlinking. (A Beautiful World). I'm new at this and thought I was doing the right thing until I read your feedback and looked at other examples. Thank you.