User talk:JudeDurate/Maria Uriarte

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Hi

This is a great start! I've got a few recommendations for you here:
 * In the lead, I would suggest removing the last sentence, which talks about the number of things she's published. That's less important to readers than the content of her research, which you've already covered excellently
 * Education section - I would recommend renaming this "Education" or "Education and Career." PeaceCorps is a little too specific for a typical Wikipedia section
 * In the media - I would suggest changing this heading to "Research" or "Career" depending on what you title the education section. "In the media" may sound a little too promotional to some Wikipedia community members. I would also spell out what those media outlets covered about her and her research. I'm guessing it's the same as the second sentence about Hurricane Maria, but it would be good to make that clear
 * I went through and moved your in-line citations outside of the ends of all the sentences. I hope that's okay! This is the convention on Wikipedia

Let me know if you have any questions! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:34, 27 October 2020 (UTC)