User talk:Jukaredaa

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Nice work!
Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Jukaredaa (talk) 05:24, 26 January 2015 (UTC)

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praise and small suggestion
Good edits on the endrin page!

One thing though : if you could be so kind, can you toss in a small edit summary when you edit? an edit summary would facilitate working through my watch list a lot. It's a simple form of paying respect to others... --Wuerzele (talk) 06:14, 26 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much for your help ! I will make you to add the edit summary on the talk page! --Jukaredaa (talk) 13:23, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
 * i dont understand what you mean (I will make you to add- a Freudian slip?) but i guess its ok.
 * thanks for adding the details of the rodenticide study. this non-target application research from 1983 ( >30 years!!) is a great example of what really happens in the field. this type of research, looking at almost an ecosystem, is still done, but becoming rarer in my view.--Wuerzele (talk) 06:32, 28 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Oops I mean to say "I will make sure to add" . And yes! I thought the study was very interesting and helpful since it includes a real-life data. As before, thanks always.--Jukaredaa (talk) 15:14, 28 March 2015 (UTC)

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Stephanie's Peer Review for EDD
Overall: Great job! This article was really informative and well-written. I thought that it was organized nicely and the page, as a whole, flowed really well. Additionally, everything was properly cited and links appeared to be working.

Opening: Good introduction, introduced the subsequent sections nicely.

History: I thought this section was well-written and organized!

Production: Maybe could be explained in simpler terms for those who do not have a strong chemistry background, but for the most part, it is nicely done!

Use: Great section! It would be interesting to see if there were any other studies that produced similar findings regarding endrin's toxicity.

Health effects: Really interesting and nicely organized. I like how you included a specific example about its health effects on humans.

Environmental behavior: Dieldrin seems out of place when mentioned. Maybe explain its relationship to endrin. Other than that, nice job on this section.

Regulation: Maybe explain the Stockholm Convention on POPs in more detail in this section rather than just in the history. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tiernesteph (talk • contribs) 19:55, 5 May 2015 (UTC)