User talk:Jul234

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (April 1)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 19:08, 1 April 2019 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Jul234, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:53, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

Quotes
Hi. I wanted to let you know that I removed your addition to the human enhancement article. For copyright reasons, the use of non-free content in Wikipedia should be kept at a minimum, and used only as part of a commentary on the topic. Since you used a lengthy quote (ideally it should be less than a sentence) and you didn't include commentary on it in any way beyond the quote, this isn't an appropriate use of copyright material on Wikipedia.

You should paraphrase what the authors had to say whenever possible. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:57, 26 April 2019 (UTC)