User talk:Julia.S000/sandbox

Julia.Sooo, this is a great draft! Thank you for going ahead and beginning to format your contribution in the sandbox. It makes your work easier to follow! I also really appreciate your linking to existing pages. The only thing that is missing from the draft: citations. Make sure to include those when you add/edit the Amaza Lee Meredith page. And you should start adding to the live page! I would also break up the 'Career' section into multiple shorter paragraphs. Overall, it looks like you will make a very positive contribution to her page. Do you plan to include any more sections? Do you still plan to contribute to the Azurest South page? I also noticed that out of her built works only Azurest South has a link. Maybe you should request that more pages be made for her individual works? Just a thought. Also I noticed that SANS heritage house might have been designed by her? Should Azurest North be added to her built works? Just some things to consider! Archandfeminisminstructor (talk) 13:33, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi Archandfeminisminstructor. Thank you for the nice feedback. I am going to add citations to the article, I just needed to check the citation-tutorial again. I have another source left on her that I want to include in the article, maybe I will include another section after that, but I havent't planned that out yet. Also, I plan to contribute to the Azurest South page after editing the Amaza Lee Meredith article. A lot of the sources I used contain very good information on it, that I want to use. I only added brief information on Azurest South in Amaza Lee Meredith's article, and meant to link the two article together later. Julia.S000 (talk) 10:41, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

→Hi Julia.Sooo I am looking at your Azurest South article and here are a few comments: 1) look back at the first sentence of the article. This is an important lead sentence that needs to give the reader a very good idea of what this article is about. As it is, it is not as well phrased as the sentence already in the article, but I do like your inclusion of Colson. Make sure, in terms of grammar and content, that it does its job. 2) There are quite a few grammar mistakes, make sure to go back over this or have someone you trust read over it looking for grammatical errors. 3) Are you planning on including any more images? You allude to the photographs. Maybe they can be added to the article? 4) Overall great job! Both of these articles are a great addition to the site. I'm interested to see how they will be edited by other users in the future Archandfeminisminstructor (talk)