User talk:Julia Qian Mao

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gendered Energy Poverty (January 17)
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JBW (talk) Formerly JamesBWatson 15:23, 17 January 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gendered Energy Poverty (January 17)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WikiDan61 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Gendered Energy Poverty and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Gendered Energy Poverty, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Gendered_Energy_Poverty Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:WikiDan61&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Gendered_Energy_Poverty reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 16:57, 17 January 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Gendered Energy Poverty


Hello, Julia Qian Mao. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Gendered Energy Poverty".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! --TheImaCow (talk • contribs) 06:15, 19 July 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gendered Energy Poverty (November 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Curbon7 were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Curbon7 (talk) 03:15, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Re-evaluating your draft
Hi Julia. Thanks for your great work on the Gendered energy poverty draft. I've given it a quick read and I disagree with the above assessments. You've done excellent work here. I am planning to make the article go live in the next day or so. Take care, Clayoquot (talk &#124; contribs) 17:19, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi again. I've made some changes to your draft to make it structured more like a typical Wikipedia article, and moved it to the "live" part of Wikipedia. The new title is Energy poverty and gender. I also agree with the previous reviewers that the draft contained some essay-like sections and promoted a point of view, so I removed these sections and made other adjustments to make the article more neutral. Congratulations on your first article! Best wishes, Clayoquot (talk &#124; contribs) 05:57, 4 November 2020 (UTC)