User talk:Juliaattie

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Hello, Juliaattie, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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History of atheism
Thanks for your edits to History of atheism. I'd like to draw your attention to my subsequent edit where I do a little cleanup and use the template to do a proper citation. It would be helpful if you added a "page=" parameter to the template with the page or pages this information came from. I have a question about one thing, it says "disbelief, Arnold argues, stemmed from boredom" which is not clear. Is he arguing all disbelief in the middle ages was from boredom? Also, boredom is not a synonym for laziness at all so it doesn't match up with prior statements in the paragraph. Thanks. —DIYeditor (talk) 01:54, 11 March 2018 (UTC)

Also, if you would like a little more feedback, I don't think the paragraph really "flows" well. The last three sentences seem sort of cobbled together rather than leading into one another or addressing the same topic. —DIYeditor (talk) 02:04, 11 March 2018 (UTC)