User talk:Julialgreenberg/sandbox

Liz's Peer Review Feedback

Great overview at the top. I love all the factual details you've included! In the "Aftermath" section, I'm curious about the statement, "Both were ultimately exonerated and their conduct was vindicated by the bar." Is "exonerated" the right word here? I didn't look at the sources you cite, but to me it suggests they were charged with a crime, convicted, and then later proven innocent. If true, more information about the proceedings against the two lawyers would be great.

One other small critique: It feels a little strange, or maybe just obvious, to say the mother of one of the victims "remains horrified." Perhaps something like "remains disturbed by the lawyers' conduct," if that's indeed what you mean.

I like that you included the pop culture section. Overall it looks really good!

On your specific questions--it seems fine to me to include Armani's perspective as long as you flag it as such. I think you've got a good variety of types of sources in here already, so I'd say you're good on that front.LenWosniak (talk) 22:45, 7 March 2019 (UTC)

Thanks!!

Julialgreenberg (talk) 09:43, 13 March 2019 (UTC)