User talk:JuliannaDeLucia/sandbox

Peer review (By: Diana Adame)
DianaAdame (talk) 03:06, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
 * As far as content goes, I really like that you made separate boxes which list all of her performances and works of art that she has participated in and created.
 * I think that your headings and way of dividing things into sections are well done.
 * I did wish there was more information for me to read, but it is obviously not finished.
 * I do think that the "early life" section should be one of the first sections that readers would want to see.
 * Maybe you can add a section where you explain some of the more recent work that the artist has been working on; or if she hasn't maybe write down why.
 * You have a very good amount of references/sources, I am not sure I saw the book that the professor has on reserve for us at the Library, but I do recommend using it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by DianaAdame (talk • contribs) 20:45, 18 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review (by: Jasmine Resendiz)
Overall, I believe you have a clear structure for your information. I would suggest cleaning the format up a bit there are is a lot of space in some sections like Solo Performance/Group Performance. I really the boxes that describe some of her performance. Again, I would recommend fixing the format there are some extra boxes that are too small and seem to be extra. There are a few things missing but it seemed like you marked where you needed to add them. Your information was relevant, neutral, and well supported. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jasresendiz24 (talk • contribs) 20:34, 18 February 2019 (UTC)