User talk:Juliapickar/sandbox

Peer Review
I think that the article for feminist art is very inclusive. I could not really seem to find and errors in punctuation. The main thing that stuck with me is the ending. The article discusses Judy Dater, but it did not show any examples of her works of art. It is a truly interested subject to depict a woman’s role in a world where roles are assigned so easily. I think portions of the article could use pictures to break up the mountains of text it seemed like there was on the page. In general, I believe that the article was/is well written, informative and educational.