User talk:Julie.Sto/Short Food Supply Chains

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"SFSCs have multiply definitions" = For this part, I suggest that you describe a few from different time periods and briefly describe and compare them.

newtorks = In the Community Networks section, double check the spelling

On a more general note, in certain parts where you describe and enumerate certain things, it is slightly elusive, try to jump directly into the content. Frederiquehm (talk) 15:41, 8 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks, I am looking through my work and adjusting the content while keeping your suggestions in mind Julie.Sto (talk) 23:59, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

In your "Sustainability Practices" eludes to empirical evidence, case studies or success stories, try to reframe the title to focus more on the concept of sustainability and its core concepts. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Frederiquehm (talk • contribs) 15:51, 8 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you! Yes I agree with this and I changed the heading to reflect the content Julie.Sto (talk) 00:00, 15 April 2024 (UTC)