User talk:JulieB.2/sandbox

Nice start, but you need to make explicit the connections between the information you provide, like the interesting study about names, to the ELV model. Which branch does it relate to: status? inst. support? demographics?

The facts that you include need to be supported by cited sources. These are not appropriately inserted for a Wikipedia article and the References section is missing. Please clarify whether Tae-Young cites Bourdieu or Bourdieu cites Tae-Young. Full references for all are needed.

Please note that your first several sentences won't be needed as the concepts of HLs and ELV will be introduced in the beginning of the larger article that you are contributing a section to. Naomi TBB199 (talk) 21:41, 11 February 2016 (UTC)