User talk:Juliethao027/sandbox/The Peasant Dance

Hi, Julie!

I love that you added more analysis and information to the "Details" box of the article. Comparing it to the original, you have more information about each corner and the meanings behind the emphasized movements with the figures. You have everything needed, with the credible, reliable sources as well as a good lead, a balanced structure, and each sub topic has about the same amount of information in them. The only thing I would suggest is if possible, to add more to the sub-topics of the painting details. You have a great start, and I feel like if you can add more analysis and possible hidden meanings (if there are any) to them, it may make it even better! Other than that, I would also suggest to keep the whole article in one perspective, preferably in third person (so without the "You" perspective) just so it stays in the same tone and so it also sounds neutral in a way (if that makes sense).

Overall, your article is great and I can't wait to see the finished published article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by ‎ 2600:1700:fc10:54f0:a5a8:d07e:b731:dc1d (talk • contribs) 06:15, 11 November 2020 (UTC)


 * I made some changes, removing "You", and merged this to the live article. – Fayenatic  L ondon 07:50, 2 September 2021 (UTC)