User talk:Juliett 1026/sanbox4

Hello Ms. Mena,

Here I have some suggestions that you might consider for your article "Goldilocks and the Three Bears."

1. You should use capital letter for "Goldilocks and the Three Bears" 2. You should place a period after the first sentence where you are introducin gthe article. 3. This sentences below have some grammar errors: This short story is about a little young girl who is wondering around in the forest alone, she came across a little cabin house... she was tired and hungry, she knocked on the door and no one was home, she opened the door and went inside the cabin. when she went inside she saw three of everything, three beds, three dishes on oatmeal on the table, three chairs. ...Instead try to change it to.. "This short story is about a little girl, who is wondering around in the forest by herself. She came across a little cabin house. She was already tired and hungry, when she saw a house and decided to knock on the door. but no one was home, then she opened the door and went inside the cabin. After she went inside the cabin, she saw three things of everything such as three beds, three chairs, and three dishes of oatmeal on the table." Torsagirl19 (talk) 16:52, 1 February 2016 (UTC)