User talk:Juliett 1026/sandbox

For the Snow White stub you should link the author Wanda Hazel Gág Also the plot for snow white has some grammatical errors you should fix.

--Indighostly (talk) 16:18, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

Hello Ms. Mena, here are some suggestions that you should consider: 1) In your stub about Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, in your first sentence you should use capital letter for White also not only "Snow" and the Seven Dwarfs also.(>>Snow white and the seven dwarfs). 2) You should place a comma after girl and a period after eyes (is about a beautiful girl who had long black silky hair and big green eyes). That sentence is too long. 3) You should start a new sentence right after green eyes. This could be a short sentence "She was in her early twenties."  4) Here also you forgot to put capital letter and apostrophe after White when you wrote "Since snow whites mother died when snow white was younger she was forced to live with her and her evil step mother." In this same sentence you should get rid off either "her" or "her evil step mother" because you're repeating yourself.

Torsagirl19 (talk) 17:08, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

Cross Edit: Snow white and the seven dwarfs- Deleted comma and added "and". Remove comma and started new sentence. Added comma after "younger". Cap the word "the".
Snow white and the seven dwarfs is a children's picture book by American author and illustrator Wanda Hazel Gág. ''Snow white and the seven dwarfs was published by Wanda Hazel Gág

Description
 Snow white and the seven dwarfs is a small format book measuring 0.2 x 8.5 x 9.5 inches

Plot
Snow white and the seven dwarfs is a small format book measuring 8 1/2 by 4 1/2 inches (22 cm x 11.5 cm) Snow white and the seven dwarfs is about a beautiful girl who had long black silky hair and big green eyes, and she was in her early twenties. Since snow whites mother died when snow white was younger, she was forced to live with her and her evil step mother. One day her father got really sick and he passed away, leaving snow white alone with her evil step mother. This lady treated snow white so horrible that snow white decided to leave one day and search for a new start at life. The step mother was beyond happy that snow white left. The step mother had a magic mirror in who she talked to and always asked mirror on the wall, who is the prettiest one of them all? The mirror always responded snow white. The step mother became hatred and wanted to do anything possible to kill snow white, so she can become the prettiest of them all.

Description
Little Red Hiding Hood is a small format book measuring 0.2 x 8.5 x 9.5 inches

Plot
This children book is about a little young girl who lives with her mother. One day the young girls grandmother got sick therefore the little girl decided to go visit her sick grandmother. little red hiding hood ( young girl) told her mother to please make some treats to take grandmother, while little red hiding hood got ready to leave, she out on a red poncho, that is how she got the name of little red riding hood. While she began her journey into the woods towards her grandmothers house, she became aware of nature, she looked at the animals and smelled the fresh air. Half way to her grandmothers house she met a fox. This fox was envious, he wanted to not only steal little reds riding hoods grandmothers treats but he wanted to eat her. The fox was smart he became friends with the little girl and she told him where she was going. He already knew where the grandmother lived so off he went to beat her in her grandmothers house. When the fox arrived at the grandmothers little cabin, he ate her up, dressed into her clothing and layed in bed waiting for little red riding hood to arrive. When she finally arrived, she did not notice that the fox was in disguised as her grandmother. Little red riding hood while asking questions to what she thought was her grandmother later found out that the fox ate her up. When she tried to get away from the fox, he ate her up to.

Description
When Sophie Gets Angry...really, Really Angry is a small format book measuring  0.5 x 9.2 x 10.5 inches

Plot
This short picture book is about a little girl named Sophie who has anger issues, like any other kid anger range might be a usual/ normal thing. This book explains on how a loving and patient mother deals with her daughter anger range. This book also explains on how Sophie deals with her anger and what makes her angry. This book is called for all parents especially mother to read and maybe get some tips on how to deal with certain toddler actions.

Description
 Goldilocks and the three bears is a small format book measuring 8.3 x 0.1 x 10.5 inches

Plot
This short story is about a little young girl who is wondering around in the forest alone, she came across a little cabin house... she was tired and hungry, she knocked on the door and no one was home, she opened the door and went inside the cabin. when she went inside she saw three of everything, three beds, three dishes on oatmeal on the table, three chairs. since Goldilocks was hungry she tried one of the oatmeal and to her taste it was too hot. She took a bite of the second bowl and it was too cold for her taste, therefore she tried the last oatmeal on the table and it was perfect. She wanted to sit and watch a little television so of she went to try the three chairs in the living room. Once again she tried the biggest one and it was just to big and she didn't like it. She then sat on the medium chair but still she didn't like it. Last but not least she sat on the smallest chair and it was just perfect for her. She sat and watched television for a little bit. Goldilocks got really sleepy so she went into the room where the three beds were in and again she tried bed to bed until she found the perfect one for her. She fell asleep and the three bears came home to see that their food was half eaten, the three bears were confused and they walked around their house and once they went inside the bedroom they saw Goldilocks there. The three bears were nice enough to just wait until she woke up, once Goldilocks woke up they asked her what and why she was inside their house with no invitation. She explained to them that she was just wondering around the forest and saw this cabin and she just came inside, she apologized and became friends with the three bears. This book teaches little kids that it is not good to touch others people stuff and that if you ask first, the outcome will be greater like meeting new people and becoming friends with them.

 Little Lost Lamb is a children's picture book by American author and illustrator Leonard Joseph Weisgard. ' Little Lost Lamb' was published by Leonard Joseph Weisgard

Description
Little Lost Lamb is a small format book measuring 10 x 9 x 0.4 inches ==Plot= This story story book is told from a farmer point of view, the farmer has 100 lambs... he takes care of these lambs. One day the youngest lamb was just wonder around the farm and accidentally got lost. Minutes turned into hours and the lamb was still lost. none of the other sheep noticed maybe because they were older who knows, after 4 hours of the baby lamb being lost, one of the other 99 noticed and decided to go search for baby lamb... the older sheep finally found baby lamb, poor baby lamb was crying thinking nobody cared about him... He was beyond happy with the sheep that came to found him. This book teaches kids that everyone matters and everyone should care about one another.

Description
Puss in Boots is a small format book measuring 10.5 x 8.5 x 0.4 inches

Plot
This small children's book is known for a Father of three sons who is very sick... He shortly dies and its up for the brothers to distribute their fathers stuff. Unfortunately the two oldest brothers took everything, only leaving a cat for the youngest brother. The youngest brother thought he was going to die because all he had was the cat that was left behind by his brothers, he thought about eating the cat. The cat asked the boy for a chance to show him that he can help out that way he shall not be eaten. The cat asked the boy for a jacket and boots and off the cat went around the town, working and collecting gifts that he bought back for the boy. They became best of friends and helped each other out. This short story requires kids to learn how to have faith and to believe in someone else.

== Cross Edit: Little Red Riding Hood- Added space between "by" and "Trina". Added comma after "sick". Cap "Little". Added comma after "mother", added quotations, added "to" and ended sentence after quotations. Added commas. Corrected "layed" to "laid". ==

Snow white and the seven dwarfs is a children's picture book by American author and illustrator Wanda Hazel Gág. ''Snow white and the seven dwarfs was published by Wanda Hazel Gág

Description
 Snow white and the seven dwarfs is a small format book measuring 0.2 x 8.5 x 9.5 inches

Plot
Snow white and the seven dwarfs is a small format book measuring 8 1/2 by 4 1/2 inches (22 cm x 11.5 cm) Snow white and the seven dwarfs is about a beautiful girl who had long black silky hair and big green eyes, she was in her early twenties, Since snow whites mother died when snow white was younger she was forced to live with her and her evil step mother. One day her father got really sick and he passed away, leaving snow white alone with her evil step mother. This lady treated snow white so horrible that snow white decided to leave one day and search for a new start at life. The step mother was beyond happy that snow white left. The step mother had a magic mirror in who she talked to and always asked mirror on the wall, who is the prettiest one of them all? the mirror always responded snow white. The step mother became hatred and wanted to do anything possible to kill snow white, so she can become the prettiest of them all.

Description
Little Red Hiding Hood is a small format book measuring 0.2 x 8.5 x 9.5 inches

Plot
This children book is about a little young girl who lives with her mother. One day the young girls grandmother got sick, therefore the little girl decided to go visit her sick grandmother. Little red hiding hood (young girl) told her mother, "Please make some treats to take to grandmother." While little red hiding hood got ready to leave, she out on a red poncho, that is how she got the name of little red riding hood. While she began her journey into the woods towards her grandmothers house, she became aware of nature, she looked at the animals and smelled the fresh air. Half way to her grandmothers house she met a fox. This fox was envious, he wanted to not only steal little reds riding hoods grandmothers treats, but he wanted to eat her. The fox was smart he became friends with the little girl and she told him where she was going. He already knew where the grandmother lived, so off he went to beat her in her grandmothers house. When the fox arrived at the grandmothers little cabin, he ate her up, dressed into her clothing and laid in bed waiting for little red riding hood to arrive. When she finally arrived, she did not notice that the fox was in disguised as her grandmother. Little red riding hood while asking questions to what she thought was her grandmother later found out that the fox ate her up. When she tried to get away from the fox, he ate her up to.

Description
When Sophie Gets Angry...really, Really Angry is a small format book measuring  0.5 x 9.2 x 10.5 inches

Plot
This short picture book is about a little girl named Sophie who has anger issues, like any other kid anger range might be a usual/ normal thing. This book explains on how a loving and patient mother deals with her daughter anger range. This book also explains on how Sophie deals with her anger and what makes her angry. This book is called for all parents especially mother to read and maybe get some tips on how to deal with certain toddler actions.

Description
 Goldilocks and the three bears is a small format book measuring 8.3 x 0.1 x 10.5 inches

Plot
This short story is about a little young girl who is wondering around in the forest alone, she came across a little cabin house... she was tired and hungry, she knocked on the door and no one was home, she opened the door and went inside the cabin. when she went inside she saw three of everything, three beds, three dishes on oatmeal on the table, three chairs. since Goldilocks was hungry she tried one of the oatmeal and to her taste it was too hot. She took a bite of the second bowl and it was too cold for her taste, therefore she tried the last oatmeal on the table and it was perfect. She wanted to sit and watch a little television so of she went to try the three chairs in the living room. Once again she tried the biggest one and it was just to big and she didn't like it. She then sat on the medium chair but still she didn't like it. Last but not least she sat on the smallest chair and it was just perfect for her. She sat and watched television for a little bit. Goldilocks got really sleepy so she went into the room where the three beds were in and again she tried bed to bed until she found the perfect one for her. She fell asleep and the three bears came home to see that their food was half eaten, the three bears were confused and they walked around their house and once they went inside the bedroom they saw Goldilocks there. The three bears were nice enough to just wait until she woke up, once Goldilocks woke up they asked her what and why she was inside their house with no invitation. She explained to them that she was just wondering around the forest and saw this cabin and she just came inside, she apologized and became friends with the three bears. This book teaches little kids that it is not good to touch others people stuff and that if you ask first, the outcome will be greater like meeting new people and becoming friends with them.

 Little Lost Lamb is a children's picture book by American author and illustrator Leonard Joseph Weisgard. ' Little Lost Lamb' was published by Leonard Joseph Weisgard

Description
Little Lost Lamb is a small format book measuring 10 x 9 x 0.4 inches ==Plot= This story story book is told from a farmer point of view, the farmer has 100 lambs... he takes care of these lambs. One day the youngest lamb was just wonder around the farm and accidentally got lost. Minutes turned into hours and the lamb was still lost. none of the other sheep noticed maybe because they were older who knows, after 4 hours of the baby lamb being lost, one of the other 99 noticed and decided to go search for baby lamb... the older sheep finally found baby lamb, poor baby lamb was crying thinking nobody cared about him... He was beyond happy with the sheep that came to found him. This book teaches kids that everyone matters and everyone should care about one another.

Description
Puss in Boots is a small format book measuring 10.5 x 8.5 x 0.4 inches

Plot
This small children's book is known for a Father of three sons who is very sick... He shortly dies and its up for the brothers to distribute their fathers stuff. Unfortunately the two oldest brothers took everything, only leaving a cat for the youngest brother. The youngest brother thought he was going to die because all he had was the cat that was left behind by his brothers, he thought about eating the cat. The cat asked the boy for a chance to show him that he can help out that way he shall not be eaten. The cat asked the boy for a jacket and boots and off the cat went around the town, working and collecting gifts that he bought back for the boy. They became best of friends and helped each other out. This short story requires kids to learn how to have faith and to believe in someone else.