User talk:Jullappy/sandbox

Adding Sources
Your sources look great. Go ahead and add them to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:27, 12 February 2017 (UTC) Added them. Jullappy (talk) 14:36, 15 February 2017 (UTC)

The Lead
Your lead is good. I suggest deleting the phrase "as a means of transportation." It's redundant. Also, remove the bold type from the last sentence and figure out how to make "high-density polyethylene" lower-case and still keep the internal link (there is a way).

Add the lead to the article with these small changes. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:42, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Excellent work. A big improvement to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:19, 26 February 2017 (UTC)