User talk:Jullian Drews/sandbox

User talk: Jullian Drews/sandbox

Jullian Drews (talk) 13:56, 12 February 2018 (UTC)

Amy's Peer Review
Great work! Two minor suggestions:

1) In the section titled History, in the first sentence you use the abbreviated form for National Theater of the Deaf. Maybe in the first sentence spell it all out and then have (NTD) and then the rest of the article you can use the abbreviated form.

2) I see you only use two different references. Maybe try to include more references from different sources, just to balance it out.

You have developed great sub-sections. I look forward to reading the finishing piece. AmyTai (talk) 01:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

David's peer review
Good work!

I copied and paste in there. I did peer review in wrong article so I have to put in your sandbox. My apologize.

A new section could be added about the famous actors involved with the National Theatre of the Deaf. You could create a bibliography of any of the actors by describing their background, what made them become actors, and how they are associated with NTD.

I found two sources that could help expand your article. Here are the links:

http://www.ntd.org/ntd_history.html

http://www.lifeprint.com/asl101/topics/nationaltheaterofthedeaf.htm

Dnalves1990 (talk) 22:49, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Elena Toppo's Peer Review
Edited the wrong article so I am revising edits now.

This article looks clear and is off to a great start.

A few minor edits: I would suggest creating a separate section for NTD's Production History, listing the show titles and directors.

Additionally adding a section about the type of work they do. You said a few types but it might benefit you to draw a distinction between the different storytelling forms used within the Deaf Community if you find that relevant. (ABC Stories? Personification? etc?) Etoppo (talk) 21:29, 25 March 2018 (UTC)

Note of sources: You have Powers listed a lot for a main source. It may be beneficial to find other sources because Wikipedia only counts that book as one source. Etoppo (talk) 21:29, 25 March 2018 (UTC)