User talk:June42

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Peer review 1 - Media Complementarity Theory (MCP)
I think the draft is well-organized and carefully structured -- I can tell the editor spend a lot of efforts on it. Yet you may consider to improve the structure, transition and content.

1. structure:

I think the overview part is oversize. Ideally, overview should briefly introduce the basic concept, theory founders, key elements and typical application -- by saying briefly I mean only 1-2 sentences for each part.

However, the overview I saw in the draft are filled by too many sub-headings. They should be at removed and fit into news sessions parallel with the overview + History & Background: This part should become an parallel setion + Theoretical Basis,Assumptions,Research Strategies: these parts should belong to the "theoretical framework" section. + Limitation: I think this part belongs to the "Critique" section. ( And "limitations" is the correct writing?)

2. Transition

I think you did a good job in transiting the headings -- they works well. So I will focus on the transition in the leading section.

One thing I notice is the abbreviation of "Media complementarity theory". It should first present inside parentheses following the full name in the first sentence.

Another thing is topic sentence of the second paragraph:"Using data collected by the Pew Research Center for the People and the Press" is irrelevant to the topic, so I think you should just keep the " MCT provides an alternative explanation to relationship between media types" part. In the following sentences, I can see you are trying to make a comparison between MCT and other theory, but the intention is not clearly indicated. Are "media treatment as a 'homogeneous entities' or a 'zero-sum game' part of the “competition-based displacement”? I think you would like to consider putting a transition here to specify.

Content

I really look forward the comparison between the MCT and other media theories -- both traditional ones and contemporary ones. I searched some literature and it looks like there are already some researches in the comparison. You mentioned it in the leading section, and it may be perfect if you develop one more section to talk about further details.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Media complementarity theory (February 7)
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 DGG ( talk ) 06:18, 7 February 2020 (UTC)

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Your draft article, Draft:Media complementarity theory


Hello, June42. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Media complementarity theory".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 15:33, 9 January 2021 (UTC)